Monday, December 27, 2010

The Blue Balloon

Blow me up
wen u want ur breath 
forced out. Burst me the
the instant, u want the anger
in u, spit out. Hold me tite wen 
lonely tears from your tender I's 
sprout. Personify the pathos u 
want to let go of, in me, and
leave me.. wen it is ready
to let you go out.....
 wen it
is
r
 e
   a
    d
      y
        2
          l
            e
               t
                   u
                          go
                                   out!

17 comments:

  1. so much in a balloon..?nice work:)

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  2. A Balloon well blown:)
    welcome to this writing space :)

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  4. The balloon speaks...good one! Keep it coming :)

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  5. That was an amazing work from you...-:)

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  6. Shape poetry :)I was meaning to try one but in vain.Your shape poetry has come out very well :)looking fwd for more :)

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  7. :) thanku annapoorni :) anna's frind uh? both of u have anna in common! :D

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  8. Hey yes..I am Gowri alias Annapoorani...Madhu's frnd also BRS mama's close relative...oh BRS periyappa(triplicane) in ur case :)

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  9. oh!!!! gowri :) got it.. how's life? pudhu dampathigal vera ;)

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  10. Amazing Subha!! Very expressive :)

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  11. Life is good!Onga area la dhan yiruken :)

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  12. Sure...Will make it out when I come to BRS mam's place :) you too come home :)

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