Monday, December 27, 2010

The Blue Balloon

Blow me up
wen u want ur breath 
forced out. Burst me the
the instant, u want the anger
in u, spit out. Hold me tite wen 
lonely tears from your tender I's 
sprout. Personify the pathos u 
want to let go of, in me, and
leave me.. wen it is ready
to let you go out.....
 wen it
is
r
 e
   a
    d
      y
        2
          l
            e
               t
                   u
                          go
                                   out!
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17 comments:

  1. vipDecember 28, 2010 at 5:31 PM

    so much in a balloon..?nice work:)

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  2. vatsDecember 29, 2010 at 1:38 AM

    A Balloon well blown:)
    welcome to this writing space :)

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  3. ManinyaDecember 29, 2010 at 4:03 AM

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  4. ManinyaDecember 29, 2010 at 4:09 AM

    The balloon speaks...good one! Keep it coming :)

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  5. subhashreeDecember 29, 2010 at 9:21 AM

    :) thanku guys... :)

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  6. UnknownDecember 31, 2010 at 4:43 AM

    That was an amazing work from you...-:)

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  7. subhashreeDecember 31, 2010 at 12:34 PM

    :) thanku seshadri :)

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  8. Annapoorani SivaramakrishnanJanuary 12, 2011 at 8:55 AM

    Shape poetry :)I was meaning to try one but in vain.Your shape poetry has come out very well :)looking fwd for more :)

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  9. subhashreeJanuary 12, 2011 at 9:08 AM

    :) thanku annapoorni :) anna's frind uh? both of u have anna in common! :D

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  10. AnnapooraniJanuary 13, 2011 at 3:26 AM

    Hey yes..I am Gowri alias Annapoorani...Madhu's frnd also BRS mama's close relative...oh BRS periyappa(triplicane) in ur case :)

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  11. subhashreeJanuary 14, 2011 at 10:25 AM

    oh!!!! gowri :) got it.. how's life? pudhu dampathigal vera ;)

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  12. AbhayJanuary 15, 2011 at 4:28 AM

    Amazing Subha!! Very expressive :)

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  13. subhashreeJanuary 15, 2011 at 9:57 AM

    tanku abhay na :)

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  14. AnnapooraniJanuary 25, 2011 at 7:16 AM

    Life is good!Onga area la dhan yiruken :)

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  15. subhashreeJanuary 30, 2011 at 5:59 AM

    oh!! super then come home na...

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  16. AnnapooraniFebruary 2, 2011 at 8:56 AM

    Sure...Will make it out when I come to BRS mam's place :) you too come home :)

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  17. subhashreeFebruary 4, 2011 at 11:08 AM

    sure.. :)

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